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Buds fall from the trees like tangible rain,
Gently altering course as the breeze commands it.
They tangle in my hair and litter the ground,
Softening the edges of rough cracked cement.

Some sweet scent wafts through the air,
Coming from delicate pink flowers.
They’re supported by a twisted old, gnarled old tree,
Strong and steady versus pale fragile beauty.

Impressions of leaves scar the sidewalk,
Left when the cement was fresh and vulnerable.
The leaves have long since dried up and crumbled away,
But their footprints still remain.
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italics, whoo! anyway i was walking the dog (it's sooooo nice out!) and a few stray thoughts popped into my head. they were exactly three, and they are the above rwl. not in chronological order, if they were the end wouldn't be an end it would look like it was just left unfinished so there ya go.

(c) me! don't steal, it's miiiiiiiiine.
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You use "old" twice in the same line.

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I'm like that random canadian penny that always finds its way into your pile of American currency.

You're always like "How'd that get there?"
i know. i did it on purpose.

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The cake is a lie.:cake:

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Mk, cool cool.
It's pretty good.

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I'm like that random canadian penny that always finds its way into your pile of American currency.

You're always like "How'd that get there?"
thanks. =)

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The cake is a lie.:cake:

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I love the second part the best
but it's awesome all around

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The problem with poet is how do you know it's deceased?
Nathan's hobbies: Kissing girls, going farther than kissing with girls, overthrowing the evil government
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:manhug: Look! It's Nate and Goren!
thankees.:D

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The cake is a lie.:cake:

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